Showing posts with label Bad English. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Bad English. Show all posts

Friday, August 7, 2015

Writing like a judge is DISGUSTING

Long sentences, complex structures, hard words only feel right in the hands of skilled English writers. 

But when an unskilled writer mistakenly thinks he too has mastered those advanced skills, he will risk making a fool of himself.

He will look like trying to speak a fake polished accent. 

In others words, he will be DISGUSTING.

Look at this CLOWN: 





Monday, October 13, 2014

Are You "Carrying on Business" or "Carrying on a Business"? (Are You Grammatically or Legally Confused?)

The Hong Kong Inland Revenue Department seems to use "carrying on business" and "carrying on a business", interchangeably.1

But, are they interchangeable?

I can easily fathom where this confusion arose.

Section 14(1) of the Inland Revenue Ordinance provides that:
"Subject to the provisions of this Ordinance, profits tax shall be charged for each year of assessment at the standard rate on every person carrying on a trade, profession or business in Hong Kong in respect of his assessable profits arising in or derived from Hong Kong for that year from such trade, profession or business (excluding profits arising from the sale of capital assets) as ascertained in accordance with this Part. (Replaced 2 of 1971 s. 9. Amended 7 of 1986 s. 12; 56 of 1993 s. 8)" (emphasis mine) 
The drafting makes it unclear whether the indefinite article "a", besides undoubtedly pointing to the immediately following "trade", also points to the subsequent "profession" and "business".  But don't blame the draftsmen. Their job is to articulate policy intentions in black and white, not to teach you grammar.

Accepted grammatical rules dictate that "a" shall precede a countable noun, not an uncountable one. This begs the question of in which category "business" falls.

The answer is, it depends on the meaning of the word "business" you intend it to have in a particular context. When you use the word "business" to mean a "a specific commercial enterprise or establishment", the word is countable, as in "Sony’s TV and game businesses". On the other hand, the word "business" is uncountable when you want it to mean "commercial, industrial, or professional activity", as in "we do business all over the world".2

The grammatical rules are clear, which, in turn, leads to the legal question whether the draftsmen intended to impose profits tax on persons carrying on "an establishment", or some "activity" in Hong Kong.

Or, are the two the same thing?

Without citing authorities, I consider it settled law that the mere establishment of an office in Hong Kong will not attract Hong Kong tax liabilities. It follows that it is the "activity", instead of the "establishment" that will.

Fortunately, the IRD is likely to be grammatically, rather than legally, confused.

How about you?




Footnotes:

1. Para 10, Departmental Interpretation and Practice Notes No. 13, (http://www.ird.gov.hk/eng/pdf/e_dipn13.pdf)


2. http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/business

3. It later came to my attention that prominent judges used “carrying on of a business”:

“ … In the case of a company incorporated for the purpose of making profits for its shareholders any gainful use to which it puts any of its assets prima facie amounts to the carrying on of a business.” (Lord Diplock, page 565, American Leaf Blending Co. Sd Bhd v. Director General of Inland Revenue [1978] STC 561 )

Assuming Lord Diplock is not grammatically or (God forbid) legally confused, a likely conclusion may be that the line between an “establishment of business” and “business activity” is blurred, in somuch as "carrying on business" and "carrying on a business" can be used interchangeably after all.
Jesus Christ, I even confused myself.


Saturday, October 11, 2014

The Peril of Cliches: a Chinese “totality of facts” approach?

Cliches are bad because they are products of lazy, careless thinking. At worst, cliches are culpable for the horrible linguistic crime of inaccurate expression.

I smelled, with respect, such a crime in a Big-4 accounting firm's commentary on the Chinese government's then newly-issued legislation (State Administration of Taxation of China (“SAT”) Announcement [2012] No.30):

“It is encouraging to see that [the Chinese tax authority] suggest to the local tax authorities that they should not narrowly focus on certain individual factors in determining the beneficial ownership of dividends; instead they should take a “totality of facts” approach on a case-by-case basis”1 (emphasis mine)

The blunt employment of the expression “totality of facts” stemming from the English common law in an article about the Chinese law reminds me of a beginner of English trying to impress his teacher with some fancy hard words in an otherwise typo-riddled, grammatically unsound essay.

As its effect of trying to impress backfired, the expression is also wrongly adopted. Let's first look at what “totality of facts” really means.

What “totality of facts” means

In the Hong Kong salaries tax case CIR v George Andrew Goepfert, Macdougall J explained the term as follows:


“There can be no doubt therefore that in deciding the crucial issue, the Commissioner may need to look further than the external or superficial features of the employment. Appearance may be deceptive. He may need to examine other factors that point to the real locus of the source of income, the employment.
    It occurs to me that sometimes when reference is made to the so called ‘totality of facts’ test it may be that what is meant is this very process. If that is what it means then it is not an enquiry of a nature different from that to which the English cases refer, but is descriptive of the process adopted to ascertain the true answer to the question that arises under section 8(1).” (page 237) (emphasis mine)
     
In the Hong Kong profits tax case CIR v Magna Industrial Company Limited, Litton V-P approved the “totality of facts” approach by the lower court as follows:

“This was, in essence, the Board of Review's approach. At para 7.23 of the stated case the Board said:

'This is a case of a trading profit and the purchase and the sale are the important factors. We place on record that we have included in our deliberations all of the relevant facts and not just the purchase and sale of the products. Clearly everything must be weighed by a Board when reaching its factual decision as to the true source of the profit. We must look at the totality of the facts and find out what the Taxpayer did to earn the profit.' (emphasis mine)

No criticism can be made of this approach. Nor has it been suggested that the findings of fact made by the Board were not based upon evidence adduced before it. If the Commissioner's appeal on point of law were to succeed it must be because the Board had misunderstood the law in some relevant particular or because, on the facts found, the only reasonable conclusion was that the profits in question arose outside Hong Kong: Edwards v. Bairstow [1956] AC 14.”

In a nutshell, the “totality of facts” approach describes an enquiry process to take into consideration all relevant facts and factors to find the true answer to a question, not to be deceived by appearance.

What the Chinese tax authority meant

But is this the same approach the Chinese tax authority intended to employ? I refer to the original Chinese law (Article 1 of SAT Announcement [2012] No.30, or “Announcement 30”):

“When ascertaining the status of beneficial ownership of a resident of a contracting jurisdiction, comprehensive regards should be had to every factor listed in [an article of a previous law] ...” 2 (emphasis mine)

On the one hand, the “Announcement 30” approach is similar to the English “totality of facts” approach in HK tax cases in that both describe an enquiry process to grasp the substance of individual cases, not to be fooled by its form. 

On the other hand, the “Announcement 30” approach is different in its methodology, in that the “factors” have already been fixed in black and white in the relevant law (that is, the 6 “adverse factors”). In the HK tax cases I cites earlier, however, the relevant factors will turn on the facts of each individual case and therefore have not been ascertained.

As a result, as the factors in the “Announcement 30” approach have been fixed and limited, it is in theory more lenient than the original English “totality of facts” approach.

Differences in methodologies aside, linguistically the word "facts" connotes a much wider scope than "factors", contrary to what the SAT's intention as expressed in Announcement 30. In that sense the common sensical, linguistic scope of "factors" is commensurate with the legal scope of those two approaches.


This leads to my suggested alternative: “totality of factors”.







Footnotes:

2. "一、在判定缔约对方居民的受益所有人身份时,应按照国税函[2009]601号文件第二条规定的各项因素进行综合分析和判断,不应仅因某项不利因素的存在,或者第一条所述“逃避或减少税收、转移或累积利润等目的”的不存在,而做出否定或肯定的认定。" (http://www.chinatax.gov.cn/n8136506/n8136593/n8137537/n8138502/12003183.html)

Friday, October 3, 2014

Crusade Against Bad English (1): "as such" does not mean "therefore"

As a former British colony, Hong Kong loves English but is bad at it. This is a fortunate fact I intended to capitalize on from Day 1 I came here. But the prevalent (and often horrendous) misuses of English, written and spoken, truly constitute my daily peeves, insomuch as mainland tourists are so to the locals. Granted, as a speaker of English as a second language, I am no Shakespeare and often prone to lazy grammatical blunders every now and then. Yet blogging about them per se can be educational for myself.

I hereby declare War on Bad English.

Lesson 1: "as such" does not mean "therefore".

The common misuse of the phrase "as such" as a fancy substitute for "therefore" can be found in mainstream newspapers, newsletters of top consulting firms, and suggested answers to professional exams. "Such" is a pronoun that must have an identifiable antecedent. If it doesn't have one, its use is incorrect. As a test, ask yourself “as what?”

Correct:
The matter was left to a group of indecisive ninnies. As such [As indecisive ninnies], they resorted to the toss of a coin.

Incorrect:
Section 8 of the Inland Revenue Ordinance (IRO) provides that Hong Kong salaries tax is charged on person in respect of his income arising in or derived from Hong Kong from an employment; office or pension. As such [As what?!], the directors’ fee and employment income received by Roger would be chargeable to salaries tax if it arises in or is derived from Hong Kong, i.e., it has a Hong Kong source.    (Suggested Answer to the 2013 Paper 5 "Advanced Taxation Practice" of the Qualifying Examinations of the Taxation Institute of Hong Kong)


More info can be found here and here.